I thought this story was imaginative, and well thought out. I also think it was an original piece, and not a rehash of previous scifi stories I've read in the past.Thank you for the effort put into this tale, and I look forward to reading more of your work!
Rich and vibrant fantasy worlds are one of my favorite things in fiction. World-building is something you could spend your whole life developing or just one day. It really depends on how much your characters interact with the world around them....Read more